Feedback Please :-)

Please can I have feedback on progression of my drawings below.

Feedback Please :-)

Hi everyone, my name is Jaya and my style is what I call 'realistic anime'.  However, this is a picture that I drew in a manga style. Please let me know what you think. I usually start off my drawings with the eyes and build the face around it, but this time I decided to do the eyes first but make the main focus of the drawing the hand.
Subsequent pictures show how I add detail and shading, which is the focal point of all my drawings.  Part of my art award adviser's feedback is to add backgrounds to my work.  For this piece I chose to add the yin and yang, which was inspired by a Zentangle design that my mentor showed me.  The attached image is the end product so far.

I used pencil to draw my own interpretation of a character called "Kilua Zoldyck" from the "HunterXhunter" series. He has lightning powers and comes from a family of assassins.  I had never really drawn a hand so I was learning as I was going along. I added the yin and yang to represent the conflict of good and bad within his character because he was brought up in a family of assassins, but he has friends that are good.

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  • Jason Lam

    On 8 March 2018, 19:51 Jason Lam commented:

    That really good. What anime did you draw from?

  • Jaya Onunekwu

    On 9 March 2018, 09:20 Jaya Onunekwu commented:

    Thanks, I appreciate it. It's a drawing of someone called "Kilua Zoldyck" from the "HunterXhunter" series.

  • Luke Taylor

    On 9 March 2018, 09:55 Luke Taylor Voice Reporter commented:

    This is really cool! I love your attention to detail :)

  • Jaya Onunekwu

    On 9 March 2018, 10:26 Jaya Onunekwu commented:

    Thank you very much. I appreciate the feedback.

  • Marie-Pierre Donner

    On 13 March 2018, 02:44 Marie-Pierre Donner commented:

    Your attention to the hand is can feel all the power in it!

  • Sâde Popoola

    On 17 March 2018, 17:58 Sâde Popoola commented:

    This is dope!! The way you've incorporated realism within the hands works really well👏🏽👏🏽

  • daniel adiele

    On 18 March 2018, 10:50 daniel adiele commented:

    Good work. Great attention to keeping the hand and head in scale, not an easy task. Well done.

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