Tom Sandry
According to all known laws of aviation there is no way a bee should be able to fly. It's tiny wings are too small to get it's fat little body off of the ground. The bee, of course, flies anyway because bees do not care what humans think.
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11 August 2017Jack and the Beanstalk: A Soaring Success
View ReviewIf you're looking for a night of quality entertainment, this for you. Unfortunately it's finished its run- but that's not the point.
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Comment posted on 10 August 2017
Wow, sounds fun! I like how you opened with a brief introduction to acclimatise the reader to the situation before going more in depth later on. This helps keep the reader engaged. A critique I do have is the capitalisation of certain words, for example St Martin's should have capital letters. The recanting of the tale could be told more vividly, by using more adjectives to set the scene, but under the guise of a more report based article this works to your advantage. All in all, a good piece of work about a fun experience.