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8 November 2018
Should the Arts be Included Within The Curriculum
This is a piece I have written for my Gold Arts Award, exploring whether the arts should be included within the curriculum.
Comment posted on 8 November 2018
Overall I felt that this was a really good argument and I enjoyed reading your opinion. I felt that maybe you should have looked at a few more statistics as I only really saw one paragraph of one statistic and I also feel you should have analysed your primary research as you only stated what they have said.