Fantastic work Isaac! You're illustrations are lovely with this story and you've clearly developed well. What tips have you learnt from you study of Quentin Blake?

I particularly like the snail and how the robot appears to be coming in from the edge, not sure how you did that but it is a good effect

thanks for your comments I really appreciate it the main hing I have learnt is that not all art work has to be neat and perfect.

also that there are a lot more different styles then I though.

This is brilliant, Isaac! Have you considered becoming an illustrator?

Thank you Luke Taylor, I don't think i want to be an illustrator but i enjoyed doing this story.